User talk:Futurist1/The Infinity Dragon
This page is disorganized, vague, fails to define terms, and is written in a tone that is not consistent with an encyclopedia entry. Recommend complete reorganization, removal of second person voice, and clarification of or links to clarifications of each technical term used.
- I second Ignoranceprior. The term Infinity Dragon is a real non sequitur. David Pearce's Hedonistic Imperative is already standard and accepted terminology in the field, so the anthropomorphic, Saturday-morning cartoon feed theme is entirely unnecessary outside of a primary school project, and wholly distracting from the scientific objective. If anything, this acts to detract from mainstream public acceptance. If it stays anywhere, recommend merge with Hedonistic Imperative—but only if examples can be found of independent use. Otherwise, head back to first base and try again. — Babelfish (talk) 04:17, 6 March 2018 (CST)