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This page is disorganized, vague, fails to define terms, and is written in a tone that is not consistent with an encyclopedia entry. Recommend complete reorganization, removal of second person voice, and clarification of or links to clarifications of each technical term used.

I second this motion! --Haptic-feedback (talk) 05:24, 4 March 2018 (CST)
I've emailed Futurist1 making him aware of these comments Deku-shrub (talk) 13:40, 4 March 2018 (CST)
How is this any different from the Hedonistic Imperative or nootropics? Also, does anyone other than Futurist1 (and his various online alter egos) use this term? Ignoranceprior (talk) 20:56, 4 March 2018 (CST)
  • I second Ignoranceprior. The term Infinity Dragon is a real non sequitur. David Pearce's Hedonistic Imperative is already standard and accepted terminology in the field, so the anthropomorphic, Saturday-morning cartoon feed theme is entirely unnecessary outside of a primary school project, and wholly distracting from the scientific objective. If anything, this acts to detract from mainstream public acceptance. If it stays anywhere, recommend merge with Hedonistic Imperative—but only if examples can be found of independent use. Otherwise, head back to first base and try again. — Babelfish (talk) 04:17, 6 March 2018 (CST)